Collage Revision
Submitted by JPre on Sat, 05/01/2010 - 07:44
After much debate about the text, I finally decided on this. It looked too simple and vague without the text, but putting it in the top-left felt out of place, unnecessary, and too much like a title. I think that integrating it and stylizing it was the best way to incorporate it, and I think that the overall balance is better now. Check out the full size version here.
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the text
The text is pretty awesome and I think it really makes this collage better. I feel like it should be bigger though, but that may take away from it too but thats just my opinion
This is one of my favorite
This is one of my favorite collages! I liked it before because of its simplistic message, and the way you have the text now helps extend the idea throughout the entire piece.
I remember when I first saw
I remember when I first saw your collage and thought that it was really well-done, but the text threw it off. And then you posted the version without the text and I loved it. But this revision is amazing -- you really made the text work and I think it's better than the version without the text. It almost looks like the text is crowd-surfing and that's really awesome. It's really balanced and looks great. Awesome job!
Putting the text in the
Putting the text in the middle makes your message more impactful. I definitely like the revision. I also like how the text appears to be moving with the crowd, reinforcing the idea of chaos. Nice job!
Text
The text in the middle looks really cool. Its almost like the crowd jumping is shaking it and vibrating the text. Good work.
I think the text looks great!
I think the text looks great! I like how you fuzzed (I don't know how else to describe it?) the text up too with the chaos, it adds to the effect you're making. This is one of my favorite collages, I really like the colors and message behind this. Great job!