I re-did my first draft, but I'm still not entirely sure I can call it my "Final Draft" yet. I worked on some of the volume problems I was having, and tried using the "Compress" effect on audacity to fix it. I think the volume sounds better, and there's not as much contrast between the volume of my voice and the volume of the songs. I also took out some of the interview, and added more of my own thoughts on the songs. You'd probably have to listen to my other draft fairly closely, though, to really notice the changes.