Final Revision of Red Dirt Road

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Final Revision of Red Dirt Road

The major difference between my final revision and the original involves the use of contrasting colors. I decided to wash out all of the color, except the red dirt road. Also, I found a much better image for the wrecked car.

I like this, especially with

I like this, especially with the drowning out of colors throughout most of the collage. However, I feel like that the "Red Dirt Road" is sort of floating a bit. Maybe it's just me.

opacity

I think that the piece that needs to stand out more in this collage is the title. I kind of liked how the car blended in so well with the background- sometimes its good to make the viewer look for something. The title, however, is just opaque enough to make me squint my eyes a whole bunch in order to read it- needs to be a bit darker.

I like this but i think you

I like this but i think you should turn up the opacity on the cross in the sky to help have it stand out a little more. I like how you made the road the only colored object. good job

I really like this- the

I really like this- the washed-out color for everything really makes the road pop out. I also like the wrecked car image- it looks realistic, but still manages to stand out.

I'm not sure if the car

I'm not sure if the car stands out. I didn't notice it for about a minute.

I also think the car should

I also think the car should stand out a little more, especially since it's the same level as the cross, I think it should stand out more since it's a more tangible/realistic image than the cross.

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