The Time Traveler's Wife- Second edit

To revise my collage for the novel "The Time Traveler's Wife", I got rid of the white outlines of the images I added. Also, I deleted the clock and hand on the right side of the image and replace it with a face that blended in with the tree. The face is representative of the main character, Henry DeTamble, and how at the end of his life (he died in the woods) he thought about his past- his wife Clare (who created art out of paper- such as the paper cranes in the image) and how he was always moving throughout time- always leaving clothing such as his shoes behind.
Here is the link for the face I added: http://s.bebo.com/app-image/8440737007/8440646405/PROFILE/i.quizzaz.com/...

Comments
I think this is a great edit.
I think this is a great edit. I think tha tthe hands the clock in the original photo didn't quite fit the flow and it looks great here with the face coming from that dark upper right corner. Everything looks really cohesive and great!
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I like the vivid colors in this and their contrasts, especially of the shoes against the path.