Love and the British Invasion

Nice intro. I was wondering if cutting one or two of the samples might kick things off more quickly. I also like the eventual focus on the 3 bands/songs. I wonder if the transition to the 3 might be rewritten to touch on the points you take up on the discussion of the three--just some trimming and focus maybe. I think your work with the three is strong. I would consider a different way of writing up to the interview snippets. Perhaps pull out the main point and use some hint about that--paraphrasish--as a lead--the stalker point about the kinks, for instance, might be lead into with something about the relationship b/n music and lyrics. I also think there may be more work to do excavating Brown Sugar. The racial stuff gets touched on, but I don't feel satisfied that it is fully explored--this might lead to a bit of a stronger conclusion about the "love" genre--this might also weave back to the transition after the intro. Lots of good stuff here.