I like the level of analysis that is brought to bear on the videos. In some of the earlier segments of the text on the screen, I felt like things got a bit static, with the text on screen for an extended period. And then in the later sections--toward the end--I had some trouble taking in all the text before the callout was replaced with another. So, spreading out the textual elements a bit more evenly would make it easier to process those elements. In the callout next to the gaming clip, you might revise the text to focus more on the materials rather than what you had trouble finding. It might be that a bit of tweaking with the text could also lead to cutting the duration a bit, which might be good with flow. These are all just adjustments. The concept and arrangement is all working well. Nice job.
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I like the level of analysis
I like the level of analysis that is brought to bear on the videos. In some of the earlier segments of the text on the screen, I felt like things got a bit static, with the text on screen for an extended period. And then in the later sections--toward the end--I had some trouble taking in all the text before the callout was replaced with another. So, spreading out the textual elements a bit more evenly would make it easier to process those elements. In the callout next to the gaming clip, you might revise the text to focus more on the materials rather than what you had trouble finding. It might be that a bit of tweaking with the text could also lead to cutting the duration a bit, which might be good with flow. These are all just adjustments. The concept and arrangement is all working well. Nice job.