Catfishing

All sources come from youtube.

The images come from google images, none are copyrighted.

All information comes from my annotated bibliography, http://teachmix.com/netwriting/content/catfishing-annotatated-bibliography

Thank you,

Alec Butler

Comments

The angle that you take is helpful for situating the online dating topic. Some camtasia moves might help with the flow and feel--clip speed and audio levels in particular. More callouts or text might help with contextualizing the materials and could replace some of the typing to keep things flowing and guide the viewer. The information that comes in the middle might be distilled and delivered in shorter bursts and with more context. The long blocks of text on the screen are less effective than more edited clips with narration or text might be, especially in terms of weaving more of the personality or controversial/intellectual debate elements into the piece throughout.