The visual imagery is nice. I wonder if at times more imagery of fireworks gone wrong might be called for. I'm not sure the movements to the Web browsers are working as effectively as they might. Maybe starting with pages already loaded might tighten things up and help with the legibility of some of the screens. It might also be worth considering whether more information or instruction could be woven in.
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The visual imagery is nice. I
The visual imagery is nice. I wonder if at times more imagery of fireworks gone wrong might be called for. I'm not sure the movements to the Web browsers are working as effectively as they might. Maybe starting with pages already loaded might tighten things up and help with the legibility of some of the screens. It might also be worth considering whether more information or instruction could be woven in.