Endangered Species PSA

Comments

I had a bit of trouble making out the stylus text in the opening. The audio does well at pulling the viewer in. Later, I wonder about the background sound--is it rain? Might be distracting after a while. The visuals of the circles with slashes are nice. I also like the perspective of animals being presented--a nice twist. I wonder about maybe transitioning from scene to scene a bit more quickly to tighten up the piece and keep the flow going. I had some trouble with the fonts when reading the stats that come around 1:40. The google earth strategy to show the effects is a nice touch. Again, maybe think about the pacing a bit with some clip speed. I wonder about the closing message and whether just a single message might make more sense, perhaps with an address or way of taking action? Nice work.