The typed tweets are working well--easy to read and do well at setting up points. I wonder a bit about the klout video's duration--maybe plays a bit long. Also, having some trouble with legibility on the long scrolls of tweets--I'm not on full screen so that might be part of it. It also could be that more intake of those scrolling tweets would help with the thematic tying together of the video. If not, a couple more of the guided tweets with you typing could help tease out the issues of making your own online identity. Nice work.
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This is really good. You make
This is really good. You make an excellent point about social media and you support the things that you are saying with different videos.
And obviously, the music is perfect.
The typed tweets are working
The typed tweets are working well--easy to read and do well at setting up points. I wonder a bit about the klout video's duration--maybe plays a bit long. Also, having some trouble with legibility on the long scrolls of tweets--I'm not on full screen so that might be part of it. It also could be that more intake of those scrolling tweets would help with the thematic tying together of the video. If not, a couple more of the guided tweets with you typing could help tease out the issues of making your own online identity. Nice work.