The visuals are nice and compelling. The pacing pulls the viewer in well. I'm having some trouble with the legibility of the tweets around 48 secs. The others are better, but the pacing is making it hard to take them in. It's probably worth thinking about how many to try to weave in and how fast. The feel and flow is quite engaging. I'm just having trouble making out the message that the tweet/screen material is trying to deliver. Nice work.
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The visuals are nice and
The visuals are nice and compelling. The pacing pulls the viewer in well. I'm having some trouble with the legibility of the tweets around 48 secs. The others are better, but the pacing is making it hard to take them in. It's probably worth thinking about how many to try to weave in and how fast. The feel and flow is quite engaging. I'm just having trouble making out the message that the tweet/screen material is trying to deliver. Nice work.