I like how the video eases the viewer into its subject. During the typing, I feel like seeing more of the memes earlier in the video might be helpful. The use of the screen as a camera is working well and there is a nice flow to the piece. I see the tweaks for the typos. I feel like this is working well--clean, moves nicely--but that it may leave some questions still on the table in terms of memes, how they move, what else they say about us, etc. Nice work.
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I like how the video eases
I like how the video eases the viewer into its subject. During the typing, I feel like seeing more of the memes earlier in the video might be helpful. The use of the screen as a camera is working well and there is a nice flow to the piece. I see the tweaks for the typos. I feel like this is working well--clean, moves nicely--but that it may leave some questions still on the table in terms of memes, how they move, what else they say about us, etc. Nice work.