The narration does well at guiding the viewer through the topic. I also like the way that the stereotype of the millennials is critiqued. A couple of tweeks in the volume, transtions of the narration might be had. I like the mix of materials used to illustrate the points. I feel like the work with the Time article might be played with a bit. The segment at 3:58 works better but some of the earlier ones are hard to process. I also like the positive elements of contemporary literacy/millennials that are brought into the piece. Some fine tuning in spots is possible, but the coverage is good. Nice work.
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The narration does well at
The narration does well at guiding the viewer through the topic. I also like the way that the stereotype of the millennials is critiqued. A couple of tweeks in the volume, transtions of the narration might be had. I like the mix of materials used to illustrate the points. I feel like the work with the Time article might be played with a bit. The segment at 3:58 works better but some of the earlier ones are hard to process. I also like the positive elements of contemporary literacy/millennials that are brought into the piece. Some fine tuning in spots is possible, but the coverage is good. Nice work.