The music pulls the piece along. I'm having some trouble with the legibility of the opening text. The volume levels might be adjusted. The tutorial works provides nice screen details about the process. Again, I'm having trouble with seeing all of the details on the screen. If I go to full screen the images get garbled. Maybe the dialog boxes can be filmed a bit more tightly to bump up their size on the canvas. Again, the volume levels can be tweaked. The working through of the steps is clear and helpful, so getting the visual up to speed will make it even stronger. The Tor information is timely, no doubt. You might think about whether split these out as two tutorials. It might be worth thinking about how you might give more background or some of the "why" information if they were split up, Nice job.
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The music pulls the piece
The music pulls the piece along. I'm having some trouble with the legibility of the opening text. The volume levels might be adjusted. The tutorial works provides nice screen details about the process. Again, I'm having trouble with seeing all of the details on the screen. If I go to full screen the images get garbled. Maybe the dialog boxes can be filmed a bit more tightly to bump up their size on the canvas. Again, the volume levels can be tweaked. The working through of the steps is clear and helpful, so getting the visual up to speed will make it even stronger. The Tor information is timely, no doubt. You might think about whether split these out as two tutorials. It might be worth thinking about how you might give more background or some of the "why" information if they were split up, Nice job.