The narration does well at laying out the main points and providing research. The narration feels a bit hurried in spots. I wonder a bit about trimming the Nanny clips. I wonder if a bit more about the controversies or intellectual elements of the shopping addiction could be laid out. For instance, ads are an interesting phenomenon that raise the question of responsibility. More transitions and callouts might be good to move from idea to idea. Nice job.
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The narration does well at
The narration does well at laying out the main points and providing research. The narration feels a bit hurried in spots. I wonder a bit about trimming the Nanny clips. I wonder if a bit more about the controversies or intellectual elements of the shopping addiction could be laid out. For instance, ads are an interesting phenomenon that raise the question of responsibility. More transitions and callouts might be good to move from idea to idea. Nice job.