I wasn't sure if you are intending to tweak this based on the feedback in class. The big things I picked up on are the audio in parts and then the distraction of the nationalism concerns that arise toward the end with the Chinese elements. If you have another version of it, let me know.
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I wasn't sure if you are
I wasn't sure if you are intending to tweak this based on the feedback in class. The big things I picked up on are the audio in parts and then the distraction of the nationalism concerns that arise toward the end with the Chinese elements. If you have another version of it, let me know.