PSA on underage drinking

Comments

I got a bit tripped up with the phrasing of the opening text as I was reading it as a question the first few times. The juxtaposition of the statistics with the slick images of alcohol imagery is working well, but may be undercut a bit by the opening text which might suggest that the teens are aware of these numbers. What about just letting the opening juxtaposition work on its own, then transitioning to the teen topic? The big structure of moving to the underage problems after the responsibility clips is working well. I wonder a bit about the text that moves into the teen problems. Some small adjustments in the opening and transitional text might make the message even more clear. Nice work.