The audio materials provide a lot of good information. I wonder about adding a few more titles or callouts along the way to set up the information. I wonder if moving to an example with more lyrical elements makes sense instead of the GM Flash. And more callouts along the way to keep the points flowing might be good. The materials do link up directly to the poetry angle. The callouts after 3 minutes really help with delivering the points. I feel like the sugar hill segment might be cut down a bit to bring in some more materials. Maybe some transitions between segments could also help with laying out the main points. For the closing segment on the Harvard Fellow and film, some cutting might be good and again, some callouts or more information to contextualize things and perhaps lead toward a conclusions would be good. I enjoyed this.
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The audio materials provide a
The audio materials provide a lot of good information. I wonder about adding a few more titles or callouts along the way to set up the information. I wonder if moving to an example with more lyrical elements makes sense instead of the GM Flash. And more callouts along the way to keep the points flowing might be good. The materials do link up directly to the poetry angle. The callouts after 3 minutes really help with delivering the points. I feel like the sugar hill segment might be cut down a bit to bring in some more materials. Maybe some transitions between segments could also help with laying out the main points. For the closing segment on the Harvard Fellow and film, some cutting might be good and again, some callouts or more information to contextualize things and perhaps lead toward a conclusions would be good. I enjoyed this.