The opening provides a nice hook. I think focusing on the Boston event makes sense. I also implicitly get that there are lots of social media references being reported on in the news. It might make sense to add some callouts or other strategies to spell out or make this dynamic more explicit along the way. The materials are working well. In some spots, transitions or smoothing might be good. When it changes to the google finder pagers again more context to guide the viewer from one bit of material to the next. Really the transitions are spots where a bit of text/callouts can help with the movement from idea to idea and help bring the message as a whole out. Nice work.
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The opening provides a nice
The opening provides a nice hook. I think focusing on the Boston event makes sense. I also implicitly get that there are lots of social media references being reported on in the news. It might make sense to add some callouts or other strategies to spell out or make this dynamic more explicit along the way. The materials are working well. In some spots, transitions or smoothing might be good. When it changes to the google finder pagers again more context to guide the viewer from one bit of material to the next. Really the transitions are spots where a bit of text/callouts can help with the movement from idea to idea and help bring the message as a whole out. Nice work.