This is my twitter video on the subject of athletes live-tweeting during their professional games. it follows the instance of Kobe Bryant tweeting while out with an injury during a Lakers vs. Spurs game in the first round of the NBA playoffs.
Love the title. The editing is all working well and the piece has a nice flow. I feel like a bit more guidance for the viewer as to how to think through the issues might be good. After about 1:40, I like the shift to the articles that get at some of the concerns related to the tweeting. That guidance might come as questions posed with callouts or typing or some other way of complementing the mix of tweets and action footage. Nice work.
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Love the title. The editing
Love the title. The editing is all working well and the piece has a nice flow. I feel like a bit more guidance for the viewer as to how to think through the issues might be good. After about 1:40, I like the shift to the articles that get at some of the concerns related to the tweeting. That guidance might come as questions posed with callouts or typing or some other way of complementing the mix of tweets and action footage. Nice work.