Sources:
http://www.ipcc.ch/publications_and_data/ar4/syr/en/mains5-2.html
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LL59es7iy8Q
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bQ7jleKfcIg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZc94cO54kY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dirks8ZdwmQ
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5_GlAOCHyE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uinhXPkloFg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h9w8zCyL48g&noredirect=1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OG2eGVt6v2o
Comments
The serene opening creates an
The serene opening creates an unexpected context for the topic. I wonder if pivoting to some of the climate change details more soon makes sense. Or maybe add some text or narration to help viewers process the relationships between the clips. The clip with Bill Nye provides good information--might be trimmed in the opening. Maybe getting to it sooner to focus the piece. After about 1:24 I feel like the piece picks up with more editing and instruction. Getting to those parts sooner or adjusting the opening in similar ways would make it even stronger. Nice work.