The video is well put together. I'm finding it a bit hard to read the text on some of the tweets--I'm not at full screen. I also like the mix of different materials. I feel like a bit more direction might be good as I try to make out the issues the video is trying to put in place. When the alternate toy story videos come up, I feel like there might be something related to DIY and creative response on the net. For the philosophy part, I get that something related to nonsuperficial discussion is being pointed at. In general, thought, I find myself wanting some of the larger concerns that might come up sketched out and made more present. Nice job.
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The video is well put
The video is well put together. I'm finding it a bit hard to read the text on some of the tweets--I'm not at full screen. I also like the mix of different materials. I feel like a bit more direction might be good as I try to make out the issues the video is trying to put in place. When the alternate toy story videos come up, I feel like there might be something related to DIY and creative response on the net. For the philosophy part, I get that something related to nonsuperficial discussion is being pointed at. In general, thought, I find myself wanting some of the larger concerns that might come up sketched out and made more present. Nice job.