I like the way the piece brings research into the discussion quickly. The narration also does well at laying out the main points. I wonder about breaking up some of the visual materials--maybe some more Web sites or other materials to complement the work with the articles. Some of the larger textual segments are difficult to take in completely on the screen and disrupt the flow of the video. In general more variety in the visuals will be helpful. The information is strong. The video segment after 3:40 creates a nice shift. I wonder about the audio. I feel like that material might be broken up a bit as well. The top ten reasons are kind of humorous, but less connected to the psychological or technological dimensions of the topic which might tie together the essay angle of the piece more clearly. Nice work.
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I like the way the piece
I like the way the piece brings research into the discussion quickly. The narration also does well at laying out the main points. I wonder about breaking up some of the visual materials--maybe some more Web sites or other materials to complement the work with the articles. Some of the larger textual segments are difficult to take in completely on the screen and disrupt the flow of the video. In general more variety in the visuals will be helpful. The information is strong. The video segment after 3:40 creates a nice shift. I wonder about the audio. I feel like that material might be broken up a bit as well. The top ten reasons are kind of humorous, but less connected to the psychological or technological dimensions of the topic which might tie together the essay angle of the piece more clearly. Nice work.