The star wars homage is nice with the focus of the piece. You might shoot that in imovie or some other app that gives the flattened effect. Also the pacing might be slowed a bit. I like the humorous focus of the opening. I'm wondering a bit about trimming or transitioning, but the set up is working well. The work with twitter is also easy to process. One thing that might be a bit of a big picture issue is the search function on twitter which delivers the top tweets by default. This is probably skewing the results so that the products and big names show up when they might not normally. In general that claim about the demographics or behaviors feels a bit untethered as it works currently in the video. The imagery segments that come up next are working well. And the follow up text picks up with a nice questions. Watch for typos, etc. The closing imagery creates a nice bookend for the piece. Nice work.
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The star wars homage is nice
The star wars homage is nice with the focus of the piece. You might shoot that in imovie or some other app that gives the flattened effect. Also the pacing might be slowed a bit. I like the humorous focus of the opening. I'm wondering a bit about trimming or transitioning, but the set up is working well. The work with twitter is also easy to process. One thing that might be a bit of a big picture issue is the search function on twitter which delivers the top tweets by default. This is probably skewing the results so that the products and big names show up when they might not normally. In general that claim about the demographics or behaviors feels a bit untethered as it works currently in the video. The imagery segments that come up next are working well. And the follow up text picks up with a nice questions. Watch for typos, etc. The closing imagery creates a nice bookend for the piece. Nice work.